Feelings.
Emotions. Anger. Hurt. Love. Happiness. Frustration. Hope.
More anger.
Hurt.
Anger.
So many feelings. People say that you can die from the emptiness inside you. But I wonder, why do they never say that the vast oceans and waves inside you can drown you as well.
What about those people who drown in their emotions? Who feel too much?
Too much all at once?
And when those lovely emotions cascade down your body, seeps through every pore, every cell. Overwhelming you. Choking you.
You can’t take it but oh, how can you get rid of it? It is, but your heart.
How do you reach inside you?
How do reach outside you?
You can’t go anywhere.
You are stuck right there in the sea of those treacherous tears and pain.
You are stuck in the heart of your heart.
You are not empty. Definitely not. But then you wonder, wouldn’t it be so much better if you could just drown in that darkness? And then have the privilege of claiming, “Yes, I am. I am empty. And I don’t feel.”
-ashmita
This looks so good!! Also are you going to post the excerpts here itself, or will you take it to Wattpad?
And does the MC say this?
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Nope. It’s staying here.
Yes, it’s a monologue of sorts.
Thankx 💫
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Oh okay! Looking forward to more!!
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Thank you. 😇
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This sounds wonderfully dark and twisty!
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Thank you ✨
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THIS. IS. SO. GOOD!! I’ve been reading it over and over for the past 5 minutes. What is the story about? Any more you’re willing to share? Obviously, only if you’re comfortable with that ❤❤❤
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If this is just the excerpt then I am sure the book is going to be a great read.
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WOW, i reread it. It’s so beautiful! It’s so dark and deep. You gonna share some more or not?
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This is well written and brings good reflection. I, too, hope you will share more.
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Ashhhh I love these excerpts! What’s your book about, if you’re okay with sharing? I’d love to know, especially after reading these. 🤩💙
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This is so beautiful ✨
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I can’t wait to read the actual book!!!!!🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩✨✨✨✨✨
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Thank you so much (cue: internal screams!!) ❤️
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Thank you!!
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Thank you so much! I sure will 🥰
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Omg thankx a bunch penjiri! That means a lot 💜
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Omg thank you 🥺😭 I was so scared lmao. Ofc and thank you! 💕
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Ahh Rayna thank you so much! It’s just this young adult book set in high school and you’re going to have to wait and see. 🙈 Thankx again ray ray ❤️
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OMG THAT’S ~ I – THANK YOU SO MUCH. ✨💜❤️ Haha Its a young adult novel set in a high school and hehe. That’s all I can say. But thank you soo much jenna!!
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Duuuuuuude, you nailed it! This was so so dark and so agoningly (is that a word) painful and yet so true!!! Loved it!!! 😍😍
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Wonderful excerpt with darkness and insight.
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Thank you Sowmya!
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😂 i have no idea what that word is but it sounds poetic lol. Thank you soo much nehuuuuuuuuu!! ❤️✨💜
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Wooow! I so want to reeead your whole book now! So good!
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This is so good! I’ll be excited to see what your book will be about!
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ahh, okay, cool then!
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😂😂😂😂
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Wow ash!! Can’t wait to read the whole thing
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Very good use of words🤝 Can’t wait to read the full book.
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Wow!! It’s amazing 😇
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Nice usage of words. Its simply amazing. Its dark but true. Its just a excerpt from your book than how great you book will be. Thabks for sharing
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Oh wow, Ashmita. This is so beautifully written 😍
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Nice! I can’t wait to read it! ❤❤ Any plans on publishing it?
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Some deep and highly emotive words here! Love the poetic language used to strongly evoke the sense of melancholy! Blessings to you! 😊🙏💛👊🎉
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Feeling is a double edged sward. It is probably easier to be on the callous side.
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Sword not sward. LOL.
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Feelings can be so complex so this was a great way to break it down! This is only an excerpt but the book sounds super cool! When can we hear more about it?😉
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Woah damnn splendid!
You’re writing a book? Good luck!
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Ashmita!!!!! I really badly wanna read ur book dude. I ACTUALLY FELT THIS. LIKE FOR REAL! WHEN I WAS READING IT. Sad. Beautiful. Tragic. It’s so relatable. Please allow me to read ur book before publishing. I cried uk, when I read this.
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Ahh panna thank you so much! That mean so much to me 😭🥺 and of course ❤️
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Thank you!! And yes, I am. Thankx a bunch Kim!
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Ah yes. Thank you so much Zainab! Haha, I will be updating as much a s possible. Thankx for ur support 🥺
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I so agree.
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Thank you! Glad you think so 😃
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Thank you so much shweta di!
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Oh my god thank you so much!!
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Thank you!!
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Thank you!! 😌
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Thankx ak!!!
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Ahh Erin!! Thank you so much!!
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Ah thank you so much Naomi! 💜❤️
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Sounds very imaginative and interesting!
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My pleasure 😊
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You are welcome ❤🤗😊
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I do want to publish it but thinking abt it freaks me out 😳😳😂 but let’s see 🙈
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🤩 thank you!
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Open. Hang. Outs.
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Cool! And, good luck! 🙂
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